Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫Ben，应母校的邀请给学生们作演讲。你的主题是“忆过去，谈现在”，请根据表格写一份演讲稿，并对学弟学妹们提出希望。

	10年前	现在
职业	中学生	中央电视台记者
饮食	垃圾食物一周两次	每天喝咖啡
业余活动	爱打篮球	难以忍受肥皂剧
周边环境	空气(air)更新鲜	更多的车，更少的树
Hopes：	……

My name is Ben. I’m so glad to give a speech here. Ten years ago, I studied here as a student. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My name is Ben, I am so glad to give a speech here. Ten years ago, I studied here as a student. Now I am a reporter of CCTV.

In the past, I ate junk food twice a week. I loved playing basketball. But now I drink coffee every day. I like watching TV, but I can’t stand soap operas.

In the past, the air was much fresher than it is now. There are more cars but fewer trees now.

【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文要求写一份演讲稿。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。时态的选择上应该是一般现在时与一般过去时两种时态。本文能够按照表格中所提供的信息，从不同方面对母校的过去与现在进行比较，时态把握非常准确。要点比较齐全，其中有合理的适当发挥。文章条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，层次分明。最后一段In the past, the air was much fresher than it is now. There are more cars but fewer trees now.比较级的使用是本文的亮点。