Question

【题目】书面表达

学校英语校报开辟专栏讨论学生学习生活，Helen想要投稿参与讨论。假如你是Helen, 请根据表格所给提示，并作合理发挥，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

提示词：垃圾食品 junk food

注意：

1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。词数90左右。

Problems	1.常常熬夜，感觉很疲劳，压力大
	2.经常感冒，感到虚弱
	3.和父母不时有争执
	4.……（自拟两点）
Suggestions	1.步行或骑车上学，每天锻炼一小时
	2.拒绝垃圾食品，多吃蔬菜和水果
	3. 制定学习计划，10点前上床睡觉
	4.……（自拟两点）

As teenagers, we face many chances, but also have problems. Sometimes we wonder when to study and when to play. Some of us____________________________________________

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I think it’s important to have a healthy life style. We should

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Answer 1

【答案】

As teenagers, we face many chances, but also have problems. Sometimes we wonder when to study and when to play. Some of us often stay up too late. So we will feel tired and pressed the next day. Our bodies are too weak and easy to catch a cold. Others often argue with their parents. Some students spend too much time playing computer games. And there are other students who can’t concentrate their attention on their studies.

I think it is important to have a healthy life style. We should exercise at least one hour every day. For example, we can go to school by bike or on foot. We must eat more fruits and vegetables, and eat less junk food. Also, we should go to bed before 10 pm. We can make a study plan. What’s more, we should make more friends and share our happiness or sadness with them. During holidays, we can go out to travel to make ourselves relaxed.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据表格中给出的信息，给学校的英语校报写一篇文章，讨论学生们的学习生活。在学生们的学习生活中存在着很多问题，如熬夜不睡觉、压力大、身体弱、与父母不能及时沟通等。我们要对这些问题提出自己的建议。因此这篇短文中应主要包括两个方面的内容，一是列举学生中存在的问题；二是给出自己的建议。需要注意的是，在这两方面的内容中，都需要我们自己补充两点，这是需要我们发挥想象力，结合自己的实际情况来补充的。要注意符合整篇短文的内容，不要跑题。这篇作文应主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称。写作时，要注意使用符合英语表达规范的句子，还有尽量使用我们学过的，平时积累的句型和短语，使文章表达流畅，意思清楚。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，针对现在学生们中间存在的问题做了叙述，还给出了自己的建议。短文作者分成了两段，第一段列举了学生们生活中存在的一些问题，除了题目中给出的三点，作者还自己补充了两点。第二段作者提出了自己的建议。这样的分段来写，使文章层次非常清晰，结构很清楚。而且作者自行补充的内容也都符合整篇文章的内容，跟整篇短文能够一致起来。作文中作者还使用了比较多的好的短语和句型，如Some of us often stay up too late. So we will feel tired and pressed the next day、Some students spend too much time playing computer games. 、And there are other students who can’t concentrate their attention on their studies、What’s more, we should make more friends and share our happiness or sadness with them等。