题目内容
【题目】写 作 (共1题,满分15分)
假如你的名字叫Lin Tao ,你的英国朋友Dave Brown 现在在北京学习,
他邀请你现在去北京玩,并给你寄来了你非常喜欢的精美明信片祝贺你生日,
由于①妈妈生病住院(be ill in hospital),需要照顾(take care of).②最近正在
为学年考试作准备,(end-of-year exam ,get ready for /prepare for).
因此你不能去,你要写一封回信表示感谢。字数60字左右(包括所有内容,
可适当发挥,开头结尾已给出,不计入总字数)
Dear Dave:
Thank you very much for______________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
________________________________________. I must stop now.
With Best wishes.
Yours
Lin Tao
【答案】
Dear Dave
Thank you very much for sending me these beautiful post cards(these post cards that you have sent me).I love them a lot. And thanks a lot for inviting me to Beijing. I am sorry to say that I can’t go to Beijing .(On one hand) , my mother is in hospital .The doctor told her she would stay in hospital for several days and my father is out at the moment, so I have to take care of her.( On the other hand,) Besides, I am busy getting g ready for the end-of-year exam. It is very important for me and I must study for the end-of –year exam. I must stop now.
With best wishes.
Yours
Lin Tao
【解析】
试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。