Question

9．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束!在此离别之际，恰逢《中学生英语》征稿，请你以"A（n）--（Lucky/Unusual/Excitin9/Proud/Regretful（遗憾的）/…）Thing"为题，简要描述一件你亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情，并谈谈你从这件事中所获得的启示．要求：
1．写短文前，请用一个恰当的形容词补全下面的标题，所用形容词可以从上面括号中选取，也可以另外选择；
2．语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名：
4．词数：80-100词．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
A（n）Thing
In the past three years，the life of middle school has impressed me deeply．Many stories happened．The following is one of them．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，写作内容是描述一件自己亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情，并谈谈从这件事中所获得的启示，因此应该以一般过去时为主，人称是第一人称，在选题时，要注意题目的中心，是以"A（n）--（Lucky/Unusual/Excitin9/Proud/Regretful（遗憾的）/…）Thing"为题，不能与题目脱离．

解答 A Regretful Thing
     In the past three years，the life of middle school has impressed me deeply．Many stories happened．The following is one of them．
     Xiao Ming was on e of my good friends．One day，a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us．From then on，we didn't talk to each other．I had hoped to make peace with him，but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face．Not until when he moved to another city
with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever．
     The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes，you should correct them at once，or you may leave yourself lasting regrets．

点评 本题是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，写作时要审清文章的要求性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．同时要根据文章的体裁和要求，注意人称和时态的正确选择．