题目内容

2013 年4月20日,四川省雅安地区发生7.0 级地震。为支持灾区,你们学校准备举行一场慈善义演,请你为此次活动写一篇演讲稿,让更多的人了解并积极支持此次活动。词数80词左右。
活动起因
多数房屋倒塌,许多人丧生或受伤,许多人无家可归……
活动内容
慈善演出的名称为“Helping the Children in Poor Areas”;
地点在操场上,下周三上午8点到10点;票价每人10元。
许多同学都愿意为义演做工作,希望大家都参加。
活动目的
为希望工程募集钱款,帮助失学孩子重返校园。
个人感受
只要人人都献出一点爱,世界将变得更美好……
要求:
句子通顺、表达准确,可适当增加细节使内容连贯;
文中不得使用真实的人名、校名;
短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
A charity show
Because of the serious earthquake in Yaan, Sichuan Province on April 20, 2013, a lot of houses broke down.
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A charity show
Because of the serious earthquake in Yaan, Sichuan Province on April 20,2013 , a lot of houses broke down. Many people lost their lives in the earthquake, and the person survived become homeless.
Next Wednesday, there will be a charity show called Helping the Children in Poor Areas in
our school. The show will be held on the playground froma.m. toa.m. Tickets are ten yuan each. Many students are willing to do some work for the show. I hope all the students can come and support the show.
We will hold the show to raise money for Project Hope and help poor children return to school. I think the world will be better as long as everyone gives a little love.

试题分析:本题是写一篇有关一次慈善演出的演讲稿。本题给出的材料较为详细,动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,句式等问题。写作中注意从四个方面进行介绍,注意谈谈自己的感受。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文人称时态问题较为复杂,注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词。注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,适当使用连接词。
点评:做英语书面表达时,要注意认真审题,分析体裁,确定时态;分析内容要点,列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性,用好连接词。最后,注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中,注意多背诵范文,熟记一些经典句型,考试时就能有所参照,有的放矢。
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请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
背景
1.认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的
2.走向社会后没有感恩意识
3. 行为方式令人担忧
学会感恩
1.感谢社会提供良好的教育机会
2.感谢父母......
3.感谢老师......
4.......
小词典:enter society进入社会sense of thanks感恩意识
要求:1.短文应包括所提供的所有内容,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数:90词左右。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.演讲稿中不得提及所在学校及本人姓名。
Good morning, boys and girls!  The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”…
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

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