Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，计20分）

根据以下提示，请你用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍一下韩国演员金秀贤。

要点如下：1. 1988年2月出生，与大多数明星不同，小时候安静又腼腆。

2. 妈妈很担心，因为发现很难与他交流，所以带他去上表演课；

3. 他勤奋努力，改变了很多，梦想成为一名著名的演员；

4. 2007年第一次亮相于电视屏幕，就立刻闻名于亚洲。

5. 2013年主演《来自星星的你》（The man from the star）,大获成功；

6. 由于他的努力…… （用1—2句话展开合理想象） 字数在90字左右。

参考词汇：腼腆 shy 上表演课 take acting lessons

Answer 1

【答案】

Jin Xiuxian is a famous South Korean actress. He was born in Feburary, 1988. He is different from most famous stars. He was very shy and quiet when he was young. His mother found it difficult to talk with him and she was very worried about him, so she took him to take acting lessons. He liked acting and worked very hard, he changed a lot, and he dreamed to become a famous actress.

The first time he acted on TV was in 2007, it was a great success. He was famous all over Aisa quickly. Next, the TV play The man from the star he acted got another great success in 2013. Though he has got lots of prizes, he still works hard. I think he will make great progress in acting in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要描述韩国著名演员金秀贤的成长历程，因此一般过去时运用较多。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。当然，写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理，表述的条理性和准确性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：该范文结构清晰，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯。尤为突出之处在短语和句子的巧妙运用，如be different from；be worried about；dream to do sth.；The first time he acted on TV was in 2007, it was a great success；Though he has got lots of prizes, he still works hard等这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。