题目内容
【题目】根据所给提示,写一篇以My Good Friend为题的短文, 不少于50词。
Kate, friend, like, sing, swimming, play games, math, English, China, Chinese food...
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【答案】
My Good Friend
My good friend is Kate. She is 14 years old. She is from America. We are in the same class. She likes singing and swimming. And she likes playing games, too. She is good at maths and English. She likes China and she also likes Chinese food. We often study together. At weekends, we often play games together.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以My Good Friend 为题目,写一篇作文,介绍一下自己最好的朋友。题目中给我们列出了一些提示词,我们可以按照这些提示词,将他们组成文章,介绍自己的好朋友Kate。介绍人物的时候,我们通常可以从以下几个方面入手,如她的名字、年龄、国籍,再如她的外貌,她的爱好、她喜欢的颜色、运动、科目等等。根据提示词可知,这里说到了自己好朋友的名字是Kate,她的爱好,唱歌,游泳,玩游戏;她喜欢或擅长的科目;她和中国的关系等。当然我们也可以补充其他的内容,这就需要我们发挥自己的想象,但是一定要注意,所增加的内容要符合全文的表达需要。这篇短文应该使用第三人称she,一般现在时态,故我们要特别注意每句话中谓语动词的第三人称单数形式的变化。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文,短文中作者按照题目要求介绍了自己的好朋友Kate。首先他给我们介绍了Kate的年龄和国籍,She is 14 years old. She is from America.。这里作者还补充说明了We are in the same class,他们在同一个班里;接下来作者说的是Kate的爱好和她擅长的事情,She likes singing and swimming. And she likes playing games, too. She is good at maths and English.然后作者写的是她和中国的关系,她喜欢中国,喜欢中国食物,She likes China and she also likes Chinese food.最后作者写的是自己和Kate经常一起做的事情。整篇短文内容完整,内容丰富,语法准确,注意了第三人称单数形式的变化。也使用了一些连词,使文章意思连贯。