Question

【题目】书面表达

俗话说“新年新气象”你是否为新的一年制定了你的新年计划?以下是你的好友Sally的新年计划。文章必须包含表格内所有内容，并进行适当发挥。要求语法正确，语言流畅，语意通顺， 书写工整。

取得更好成绩	每天按时完成作业；多看书，了解不同国家的文化
保持健康	多锻炼，多吃健康食品，少吃垃圾食品
提升自我	培养一个爱好，比如画画弹钢琴。
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注意：文章开头已写出，可供参考，不计入词数；2.词数：60-80左右。

Sally is my best friend. New Year is coming, she’s made some resolutions.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Sally is my best friend. New Year is coming, she’s made some resolutions. She is going to get good grade. She will work hard at my subjects, such as English, Chinese and so on. She will do her homework on time everyday. She will read more books and know about different country culture. She will do sports every day and eat more healthy food but less junk food to keep healthy. She wants to improve herself. She is going to have a hobby, like drawing, playing the piano and so on. She has confidence in herself. She wants to be a very good student next year.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写Sally的新年计划。全文主要用一般将来时态，主语是第三人称。文章必须包含表格内所有内容，要求语法正确，语言流畅，语意通顺， 书写工整。

写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如do sports ，work hard at，such as，and so on，be proud of，help with，have confidence in等短语，不定式做宾语 to improve these subjects；文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。