Question

【题目】作文（10分）

假如你叫李平，你的笔友Scot不久将来到你的家乡访问。他希望你能提前告知一些你家乡现在的情况。请根据下面的提示写一封英文信。简要描述你的家乡现况。

位置：赣江边；

面积：40万平方公里；

人口：30万；

交通建设：修建多座立交桥，拓宽了主要街道；

环境保护：迁移改造产生污染的工厂，净化了水源；

人才引进：广纳各类专家，技术人员；

相关词汇：交通：transportation，立交桥：traffic bridge，改造：transform

信的开头已经给出。

Dear Scot,

I'm very glad to know form your letter that you'll pay a visit to my hometown. And I'm too glad to tell you that my hometown has taken a new look!

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Look forward to seeing you soon!

Yours

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Scot,

I'm very glad to know form your letter that you'll pay a visit to my hometown. And I'm too glad to tell you that my hometown has taken a new look!

It lies on the Ganjiang River, covering an area of 40 square kilometers with a population of about 300,000.

The government pays special attention to its transportation. Some traffic bridges have been built； and the main streets have also been widened. To protect nature, the government has managed to transform or move the factories far away which polluted the air and water much. Also, many other measures are being taken to prevent pollution. To meet the need of the development, all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.

I believe the people in my hometown will have a better life and will surely be richer and happier.

Look forward to seeing you soon!

Yours

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文主要讲述了作者李平的笔友将来他们家乡参观，希望提前了解他们家乡的变化。考生在写作时要注意论点清晰及条理清楚。题目已给定大致的观点，要注意汉译英的正确性以及不要遗漏观点，特别注意不要逐条翻译。

写作亮点：本篇短文作者从家乡的位置，面积，人口，交通，环境等方面介绍了家乡的情况。本篇文章句式的灵活多变。用到一些好的语句如：I'm too glad to tell you that my hometown has taken a new look!

any other measures are being taken to prevent pollution给文章增色不少。