题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
请以Millie的名义写封信向Bill介绍你的家乡,并邀请他到你家作客,同时在信中告知他到你家怎么走,要点如下:
1. 我的家乡扬中是位于江苏南部的一个小城市,……。扬中因美食而闻名,你可以来尝尝河豚(balloonfish)
2. 我住在市中心。沿着迎宾大道(Yingbin Road)走,在第二个交通灯处向右转弯;一直往前走,你会看到一座桥,过桥,我家就在道路的拐角处。
3. 我的父母将为我们准备……,我期待……。
注意:
1. 词数: 80词左右(开头已给出的内容不记入总词数);
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点,要适当发挥;
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯;
4. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Dear Bill,
I’m going to tell you something about my hometown.___________________________________________
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Yours,
Millie
【答案】
Dear Bill,
I’m going to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown Yangzhong is a small city in the southern part of Jiangshu. It's beautiful and is famous for some delicious food. If you come here, you can taste balloonfish.
I live in the middle of the city. Please come to my house and let me tell you the way. First walk along Yingbin Road and turn right at the second crossing. Go straight and you will see a bridge. Go across the bridge and my house is at the corner of the road.It's not difficult to find it.
My parents are going to prepare something delicious to eat for us. I am looking forward to meeting you in Yangzhong.
Yours,
Millie
【解析】
试题分析:本题要求以Millie的名义写封信给朋友Bill介绍自己的家乡。首先这是一封书信,要注意书信的基本格式。同地这是一篇提纲作文,要按照提纲提示的要点:家乡的简介、来家的路线、对朋友的邀请与欢迎等等方面展开写作。短文用第一、三人称,一般现在时态。短文要包含提示的所有要点,并作恰当的发挥。要注意条理清楚,语句连贯。
写作亮点:本文第一段简单介绍了家乡的位置及美食海豚。第二段邀请朋友来家里玩,同时详细介绍了来家的路径。第三段再次希望朋友的光临。短文层次分明,条理清楚,语句连贯。短文准确运用了be famous for, let sb. do sth, walk along, go across, prepare for, look forward to doing sth等等短语和句型结构,为本文增色不少。明确了短文中心,突出了短文主题。