题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你交了一个叫Tom的笔友,请你介绍一下他的情况,写一篇50词左右的短文。
提示:1) 他的国籍及年龄2) 他的家庭情况 3) 他的理想工作及理由
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【答案】
I have a pen pal in Canada. His name is Tom, he is 15 years old. Tom is a clever boy, so he can speak three languages. There are four people in his family, they are his parents, his sister and him. Tom’s father is a doctor, he always helps others and he likes his job very much. His mother is a teacher, she teaches math in a middle school and the students all like her. Tom’s parents want him to be a teacher, too. But Tom don’t like it, he don’t like children. He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it’s very exciting and interesting.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容介绍笔友的国籍及年龄、家庭情况、理想工作及理由。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯,运用了so,but等连词进行衔接。同时,本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it’s very exciting and interesting.等。