题目内容
【题目】书面表达:请以“my ideal school’’ 为题,根据以下要点写一篇短文。
要求:1.语言准确得当,条理清晰;2.必须包含以上所有要点;3.词数:80左右。
要点:
1. 一所混合学校;每天早上八点半开始上课,不需早起;下午三点半放学,有时间进行课外活动;
2. 选科目学,我希望上电脑课和体育课,喜欢电脑体育;
3. 和以前比作业更少、进行业余爱好的时间更多;每个月进行一次学校郊游;……
My ideal school
Let me tell you something about my ideal school! ___________________________________________
【答案】
One possible version:
Let me tell you about my ideal school! It is a mixed school. Every morning I don’t need to get up early because we have lessons at 8:30. In the afternoon, school is over at 3 :30, then we can do a lot of after-school activities. At school, we can choose subjects to learn. I hope we can have computer lessons and PE lessons every day because I like computer and sports. We have less homework and have more time for our hobbies than before. Every month, we also go on a school trip. We always have fun. This is my ideal school. I love it very much. What about you?
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我理想的学校。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Let me...;Every morning I don’t need to ...;I hope we can...;This is...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我理想的学校是一所混合学校,接下来介绍学校的作息时间,所学科目,作业以及活动,最后介绍自己喜欢这所理想的学校。此处tell sb about sth, need to do sth, get up, every day, go on a school trip, have fun,what about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。