Question

【题目】书面表达

新年开始之际，每个人都会制定一份新年计划，你的计划是什么呢？请写一篇短文介绍一下自己的计划。 要求：语言通顺，注意时态。(80词左右)

提示语：get more exercise, take up, learn to play the piano, study hard…

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

The New Year is coming, and I has made some resolutions. First of all, I’m going to spend less time in front of the TV and the computer. I had better do more reading to learn more about the world. Secondly, I’m going to join in some sports activities to keep healthy. Last, I’m going to learn to cook delicious food. I have so many solutions, and I’ll try my best to keep my resolutions.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给话题作文，介绍自己新年的计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般将来时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I has ...， I’m going to....，I have ...，I’ll try my best to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己尽力完成计划的决心。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了新年即将到来我制定一些计划，接下来介绍自己的计划，读书，参加体育活动，学习做饭，最后指出自己要尽力完成计划。此处make resolutions, in front of, had better, do reading, learn about, join in, learn to do sth, try one’s best to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。