Question

Lily 和Lucy 一样高，Lucy比Lily外向，但是Lily比Lucy学习用功, Lucy比Lily聪明。
Lily 和Lucy都很健康，因为她们每天都锻炼，一星期要吃四至五次的蔬菜，而且从不吃垃圾食品。
上个周六，她们和同学们一起骑车去人民公园（the People’s Park）玩了，上午划船，下午做游戏，玩得很开心。
Lucy and Lily are my classmates. They are twin sisters.____________________

Answer 1

Lucy and Lily are twins. They look exactly the same. They both like to go shopping and have a nice afternoon tea. They also share the same interest of watching movie together. Despite their similarities, they have different looks and personality. Lily has short curly hair, and Lucy has long straight hair. Lily is a huge fan of bike-riding, so she is a really outgoing person. In contrast, Lucy enjoys reading and play violin. She is really quiet. But, everyone has to admit that they are beautiful.

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