题目内容
【题目】书面表达
提示:每个人都会遇到许多人和事,都会或多或少对你产生影响,使你感悟,令你深思。请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受,以“A good teacher in my eyes”为题写一英语篇短文,词数不少于50-60个。
要求:1.紧扣主题,语言通顺,书写规范,卷面整洁。
2.文中不得到出现真实姓名,校名及地名。
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【答案】
A good teacher in my eyes
I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher. She is a woman of medium height. She is in her thirties. Her name is Nancy.
I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons. To start with, she spent a lot of her spare time talking with us, helping us with problems in study and personal life. Second, the wonderfully creative lessons she delivered make English learning no longer a hard job but full of fun. I enjoy every minute of her lesson. And third, Nancy's warmly human character creates a bond of friendship that will last forever. Her great sense of humor and encouraging words made us close to each other like friends
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇命题作文,以“我眼中的好老师”为题写一篇作文。写作时,要注意文章结构的完整性,在写人记事时都要表达清晰,逻辑思维严谨。尤其要主语主谓一致,在使用不同的时态时动词要发生变化。句子之间注意衔接。
写作亮点:章结构完整,表达清晰,用了很多比较复杂的词汇和句子。例如:I was very lucky to have met many good teachers, among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher.我很幸运遇到了很多好老师,其中印象最深的是我的引语老师。 among whom引导是个定语从句,其中又用了形容词最高级。I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons我把nancy认为是好老师有三个原因;Refard….as….把……认为……。还有spend time doing sth.花时间做……;no…but…不是……而是……;等等。另外文章陈述三个理由,用了To start with;Second;And third使文章结构更清晰明了。
【题目】书面表达
我校正在开展“书香菁园,筑梦中国”的读书节活动,请你根据这项活动的主题,向全校同学发出倡议。请参考表格内容,用英语写一份倡议书。
读书的意义 | 1. 获取知识,开阔视野;2. 使人愉悦,益于学习;3. …… (自由发挥) |
现 状 | 1. 作业多,无良好读书习惯;2. 电视和网络占时多。 |
倡 议 | 1. 每天花尽可能多的时间读书;2.……(自由发挥) |
要求:1)要点完整,不要逐句翻译;
2)句子通顺、连贯,加入适当的连接词,做适当发挥;
2)80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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