Question

【题目】书面表达

请以My neighbour 为题写一篇短文，词数70左右。

要点：

1.Sandy是我的邻居，她家住在市中心的一套公寓里，公寓有…室，她最喜欢书房；

2.她是一名学生，个高且漂亮，乐于助人…,经常帮助老人，昨天帮我学习英语；

3.我希望…(自由发挥1~2句)

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Answer 1

【答案】

My neighbour

Sandy is my neighbour. She lives in an apartment in the center of the city. There are two living rooms, a study and some bedrooms in her apartment. She likes the study best. Sandy is a student. She is tall and beautiful. She likes helping others and she often helps the old. She helped me with my English yesterday. I hope we can be neighbors and friends forever.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是以“My neighbour”为题的提纲作文，介绍自己的邻居。根据要点提示，短文要从“邻居的家”，“邻居的人”及“我的希望”几个方面展开写作。短文主要用第三人称单数、一般现在时态。在写作中要注意正确地使用词汇及句型，避免汉式英语。

写作亮点：本范文语言通顺、句型结构正确，包含了提示的所有要点。用了live in, in the center of, like best, like doing sth, help sb. with sth等等短语，及there be结构、宾语从句等等复杂句式。使短文文采飞扬，具体生动。是一篇较好的习作。