Question

书面表达（共1小题，满分20分）

假设你是Li Dan，你的英国网友Sally目前正在上海学习中文。请根据表格中所给的信息给她提出一些学好中文的建议。（80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数。）

要求：所给的建议必须包括表中的信息，并适当发挥。

Sally’s problems	Your advice
forget new words easily.	remember 4 or 5 words a day, ……
Chinese grammar is too difficult.	write down the correct answers next to the mistakes ,……
can’t speak Chinese well.	try to speak Chinese as much as possible, ……
don’t know how to improve listening.	watch Chinese films and listening to songs, ……

Dear Sally,

Glad to hear you are learning Chinese in Shanghai. Don’t worry about your problems. Here is some advice for you. ________________________________________________________________

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____________. I really hope my advice helps you a lot. Welcome to Jinhua!

Li Dan

Answer 1

Dear Sally,

Glad to hear you are learning Chinese in Shanghai. Don’t worry about your problems. Here is some advice for you.It's really difficult to remember new words .Remember 4 or 5 words a day,you won't forget it.Write down the correct answers next to the mistakes，you won't feel Chinese grammar too difficult.If you can't speak Chinese well，try to speak Chinese as much as possible，you will speak it well.Watch Chinese films and listening to songs，you will improve your listening. I really hope my advice helps you a lot. Welcome to Jinhua!

Li Dan

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求作者“李丹”以第一人称的形式，根据表格中所给的信息给她提出一些学好中文的建议。词数要在80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数。并要求所给的建议必须包括表中的信息，并适当发挥。

【亮点说明】这是一篇不错的作文。作者根据Sally的难题回复，提出建议。文中用了祈使句，条件状语从句，并且语法没有错误，语言通顺，时态正确。值得学习。

考点：话题作文。