Question

假如你叫王浩，今天是开学的第一天，请根据表格中所提供的信息，向班上的同学介绍一下你自己。词数：50词左右。

电话：5340261

家庭成员：祖父母、父母、叔婶、堂弟和自己

爱好：排球、网球

收藏品（collection）：5个网球拍，4个排球

喜爱的食物：鸡肉，苹果

                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version：
I’m Wang Hao. Nice to meet you! Let me introduce myself. I have a big family. There are eight people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my uncle, my aunt, my cousin and I. I like volleyball and tennis. I have five tennis rackets and four volleyballs. I like chicken and apples.  My phone number is 5340261.I hope to make friends with everyone.Thanks.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，假设自己是王浩并向同学介绍他自己的家人。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如There are ......，They are......及I like...... 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己希望和大家交朋友。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了家庭成员，接下来自己的爱好，最后指出自己希望和大家交朋友。此处用了 introduce myself， hope to ，make friends with等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。