Question

假如上周日你参加了长江社区的Yard Sale活动。请给你们学校校刊上的English Club栏目写一篇关于此次活动的介绍。
要点如下：
1有200多人参加了此次活动；
2有的人出售旧物如：衣服、玩具、自行车等；
3有的人出售自制的蛋糕、卡片、书签等；
4还有的人交换旧书；
5请写一至两点你对此次活动的看法。
注意：
1词数60—80 ，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。不要逐条翻译。
参考词汇：
Changjiang Community  n .长江社区 exchange  v. 交换  used  adj旧的

Answer 1

It was fine last Sunday. I went to the Yard Sale in Changjiang Community. More than 200 people took tark in the activity .Some people sold used things such as bikes, toys, and clothes. Others sold cakes, cards and bookmarks made by themselves. Used books could be exchanged in the yard, too. I enjoyed myself there. In my opinion, it was a very good activity. We can not only make full use of used things, but also protect our environment in this way.

作者根据题目要点提示，对Yard Sale情况进行了描述最后谈了自己的看法。整篇文章行文流畅，能较好地运用所学短语和句型来表达自己的意思，语句通顺，语法运用得当。