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莹莹的父母外出打工了,她到学校寄宿学习。开始她感到不习惯,在老师和朋友们的帮助下,现在学习、生活非常好。假设你是莹莹,请根据下表提示给父母写一封信,介绍你的在校情况和今后的打算。
1
Subjects
favorite, do well in …
2
Activities
competition, sports …
3
Friends
get on well  …
4
Spare time
wash clothes, reading …
5
Plan
work hard  …
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
2. 条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范。
3. 可以适当发挥。
4. 词数:80词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mom and Dad,
How time flies! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. But now I enjoy my school life.
Yours,
Yingying

Dear Mom and Dad,
How time flies! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. But now I enjoy my school life. We have nine subjects at school. My favorite subject is history. It's interesting and I can learn a lot from it. With the help of my teacher, I do better in English. There are many activities at school. Last week, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize. I have made lots of friends here and we get on well with each other. In my spare time, I usually wash my clothes or do some reading. Sometimes I play sports with my friends. I'm stronger than before. Don't worry about me. I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.
Yours,
Yingying

试题分析:这篇短文要求我们就表格内容写一封给妈妈的信。表格中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容。主要内容包括:一是关于学科方面,包括你最喜欢的学科和擅长的学科等。二是关于活动方面,比赛和体育活动有什么等。三是交友方面,你与同学们相处情况。四是业余时间的活动,如洗衣服、读书……五是你的计划,如今后要努力学习……这5方面的内容是我们写作的根据,但还需要我们自己去充实一些内容,让短文更加完整、充实。我们需要发挥想象力,把我们平时积累的知识加以运用。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接要紧密,使文意连贯,表达流畅。时态方面要注意,如Last week, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize.等,叙述过去发生的事情要用过去时态。如I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.对将来的打算计划要用一般将来时。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者紧紧围绕要点,向妈妈讲述自己的一些情况,并告诉妈妈自己的计划等。叙述要点完整、正确,清晰,语言连贯流畅,有效地传达了规定的信息。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得很好,如It's interesting and I can learn a lot from it..等。这些内容都比较符合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如How time flies! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.等。
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“What?” she asked, still doing her work.
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