Question

在日常生活中我们都会遇到压力，尤其是初三学生。你是如何排解压力的呢？请以“How to reduce the pressure ” 为题，写一篇90词左右的文章，阐述自己的观点。
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你遇到的压力（pressure）是什么？（如作业多、考试成绩不理想等）
你是如何减轻（reduce）压力的呢？(如听音乐、看电影、和朋友聊天，锻炼身体等)
How to reduce the pressure
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Answer 1

How to reduce the pressure
Now ,we are under too much pressure, it's very important to reduce the pressure.
I have too much pressure. For example ,1 have too much homework. I stay up doing homework every day. I feel very tired. I try my best to study, but I still can't have good grades. I'm always sad.
I always reduce the pressure by sleeping. After I wake up, I will forget all my problems. I'll get happy, I also listen to music to reduce the pressure. It's helpful for me, too. Sometimes, I reduce the pressure by watching TV.
Even if we are under too much pressure, we should face them happily.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己如何排解压力。本题所给材料比较简单，需要自己围绕材料适当发挥。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性,注意应用所给单词，短语。结合材料可知本文主要是一般将来时态，第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，stay up， try my best to ， After I wake up，also，Sometimes，Even if，Now。可见该生英语功底扎实。