Question

最近你和父母就你要参加校篮球队一事交换了意见，各自阐述了观点。 现在请你参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文。

Your parents’ ideas	Your ideas
1. less time for study	finish homework in time
2. not strong enough	want to be stronger
3. get easily hurt	be careful
4.be with bad students	… …
5. … …		… …

 
注意： 1. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提及内容，省略号部分务必补充完整。
2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及本人姓名。
Should I join the school basketball team？
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should be allowed to join the school basketball team.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Should I join the school basketball team？
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should join the school basketball team.
They don’t think I am strong enough to be a good basketball player. I might get hurt while playing. And they hope I will spend more time on my studies. They think the students who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy.
However, I don’t agree with them. I know they care about me. But becoming a member of the school team is my dream, you know. I’ll try my best to keep a balance between my study and sport. And I can be more careful when playing. The other members are friendly and helpful. I can make friends with them. Playing basketball can make me stronger and more energetic. It’s more important for me to learn how to work with others in a team.

试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
点评：本文属于图表类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。