题目内容

假设你叫李明,收到美国中学生Emily的邮件,请给她回复并谈谈你的看法。

Dear Li Ming,
It’s a long time since we last met. I have joined a club called “Green Earth”. I plan to make a speech about saving,for some people often waste things, like water, food and energy. You always have great ideas. Could you please choose one from the three and tell me what people should do in everyday life?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Emily
 
Dear Emily,
Thank you for your letter._____________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
 


One possible version:
Dear Emily,
Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to share my ideas with you. What you are doing in the “Green Earth” club is meaningful.
I am also strongly against any kind of wasting. With such a large population in China, food is especially precious. People should be encouraged to eat at home. In this way, the leftovers can be the next day’s meal and much less food would be wasted. If people do have to eat outside and there is food left, they should take it home and eat it later.
I believe it’s our duty to protect our earth. Actually it is not that difficult. A little more attention from everyone in daily life will be of great help.
Yours,
Li Ming

解析试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作,写一封回信。本题材料主要是一封来信,故动笔前一定要认真阅读来信。在回信中对涉及的问题都要有所回应。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,人称主要为一般现在时态。写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
考点:应用文写作
点评:注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题,时态一般是一般现在时态,人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,符合逻辑。

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假如你叫Mike,是无锡市某初级中学的一名九年级学生。今年11月22日是感恩节,为感谢师恩,学校将组织由学生推选“十佳教师”的评选活动。你计划写一封推荐信给校长Mr Smith,推荐你的老师Lucy当选,请你根据要点提示写一封电子邮件给Mr Smith。
内容提示见下表:

基本情况
英语教师;今年35岁;教过很多学生
性格特征
从不轻言放弃;有足够的耐心教我们说英语
突出事迹
曾帮助学生参加英语口语比赛并获得高的分数
个人愿望
1.想通过努力成为优秀教师,希望……
2.想做志愿者工作,因为……
注意:
1.推荐信须包括表格内所有信息,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.表格中“个人愿望”一栏,请用自己的2~3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3.词数80个左右,推荐信的开头和结尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
4.参考词汇:英语口语比赛 Spoken English Contest   志愿的 voluntary
Dear Mr Smith,                                                      
How are you these days? Today I would like to recommend our teacher Lucy as one of the top ten teachers.                                                                        
                                                                                                                                                                     
                                                                               
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                               
                                                                             
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mike

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