Question

【题目】 每个人都有爱好，你的爱好是什么？请以My hobby/hobbies.为题，写一篇关于你爱好的文章，文章中你介绍你的爱好不超过两个，写出你为什么喜欢这项爱好，喜欢此爱好多长时间了，它给你带来了什么好处。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hobby

Different people have different hobbies .For example ,someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to music .Now I often listen to music. When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.

Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try.

【解析】

试题分析：本文以听音乐为自己的爱好，介绍了听音乐的好处。文章能够清楚地表述自己观点和想法，写作时应注意要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，用一般现在时 以第一人称来叙述。

写作亮点：这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。同时使用了排比句，这为文章增色不少，如：someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on .When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable。在学习中注意积累，背诵一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。