Question

【题目】书面表达。

你看过类似的老人跌倒无人理会的新闻吗？你听说过最美女教师救她的学生的故事吗？对这两种社会现象，你有什么看法呢？请你以“Would you like to help others?”为题写一篇短文。

内容包括：

1. 你对上面其中一件事的看法。

2. 如果你遇到了这样的事情会怎样做。

3. 讲述你的一次类似经历。

作文要求：1. 词数80个左右，不得逐字逐句翻译。　2. 条理清晰，语句连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Would you like to help others?

After reading the news, I felt very sad. Why didn’t people help the old man? The things they did were so terrible! We need to help each other, don’t we? I think if I meet this kind of thing, I will call the police and try my best to help the old man. Last year, on my way to school, I saw a car accident happen. I stopped and called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured. At last, she was saved.

If we help each other every day, our world will be warmer and more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文。注意人称和时态。文中使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I will call the police and try my best to help the old man. asked other people to help the woman who was injured.等，定语从句the woman who was injured.，反义疑问句和简单句等句式使用，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有感染力。