Question

假设李华是你的好朋友，请根据下面的提示，以“My good friend”为题写一篇小短文。

     提示：李华是班里个子最高的，他擅长打篮球。在所有的学科中，他的英语最好。他在班里是最友好的，经常帮助别人，因此，老师和同学们都很喜欢他。在家里，他经常帮父母做家务活儿，父母也帮他学习功课。李华是学校最好的学生之一，我们应该向他学习。

     要求：适当发挥，60词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

       I have a good friend,His name is Li Hua.

       Li Hua is the tallest boy in the class.He is taller than any other boy in the class.Because of his height,he plays basketball well,He is good at playing it.He studies English best of all his subjects.He is the best student in the class,He always helps other people.So,we all love him so much,Both teachers and students thinks he is very kind.When Li Hua stays at home,He often helps his parents do housework.And his parents also help him with his homework.

        Li Hua is one of the best students in our school.We should learn from him.

【解析】

试题分析：：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是运用比较级和最高级，主语是第三人称，注意时态和时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系

【亮点说明】这篇范文条理清晰，内容明确，详细列举了所给要点并且加入了自己的组织语言。运用了大量的比较级和最高级，例如： the friendiest student in the class， taller than any other boy of all boys，one of the best students in our school，best of all his subjects。只有在平时熟练的掌握形容词副词的比较级，才能更好的熟练运用。

考点：提纲作文。