Question

书面表达

假定你是张强，是一名初二学生。上星期天你从报纸上看到保护野生动物俱乐部(Friend of Nature)的招聘广告。请你写封简短的应聘信，介绍自己的情况(见下表)，表示愿意为俱乐部做一些工作，并请俱乐部负责人考虑并尽早予以答复。在作文中不能出现真实姓名、校名。

姓名	张强	年龄	15
身体状况	健康	性格	乐观的；诚实；有幽默感
爱好	英语、旅游、打篮球
相关经历	去年就保护野生动物给报社和杂志写信
理由	……(自拟2条加入俱乐部的理由)
联系方式	010—8255668；zhangqiang@163.com

注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

2. 词数70-80。

Dear sir,

I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I'm writing to tell you I'd like to become a member of Friend of Nature.

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Yours sincerely

Zhang Qiang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir,

I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I'm writing to tell you I'd like to become a member of Friend of Nature.

I am a student from Grade 8. I’m in good health. I am very helpful and ready to help people any time. You can believe what I say. I have a good sense of humour. Anyone never feel bored or unhappy when he is with me. My favourite lesson is English. I’m also interested in travelling and playing basketball. I often practise with my friends on Wednesday afternoon after school. Last year I wrote to newspapers and magazines about how to protect wild animals.

I would like to become a member of Friend of Nature because I enjoy the beauty of nature and like wildlife a lot. I am interested in reading about wildlife and I quite understand the important of protecting wildlife. I want to do something to help wildlife and protect the nature.

I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010—8255668 or e-mail me at zhangqiang@163.com.

Yours sincerely

Zhang Qiang

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作首先对自己个人的情况进行介绍，包括年龄，职业，健康状况，性格等。对自己最喜欢的科目也要进行介绍，并且说明自己非常喜欢旅游热爱亲近自然，自己也有相关的工作经历，如wrote to newspapers and magazines about how to protect wild animals，第二段对想加入俱乐部的理由进行描写，可以从自己喜欢野生动物，理解保护他们的重要性方面进行阐述，最后表达自己非常期待加入俱乐部，期待回信。

考点：提纲类写作

点评：在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达。按照提纲的提示，有条理的将各个信息表达出来，英写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采。