Question

本周末我班级将举行英语演讲比赛，要求每位同学用英语介绍一位自己最喜欢的电影明星的情况。假设你最喜欢的电影明星是张曼玉。请根据下面的表格用英语准备一篇发言稿。要点如下：

外貌	才华	经历	奖项
美丽，谦虚 明亮的眼睛 中等身材	丰富的表演经验 擅长中文，英语和法语 有天赋的女演员 擅长表演机智的侦探角色	1964年9月20日出生于香港 8岁时搬到英国 17岁返回香港 成为演员之前做过模特	首次在电影The Frog Prince中露面 在台湾金马电影节中（Tai Wan Golden Horse Film Festival）, 获得最佳女演员奖。

注意：

1. 要求包括内容要点，语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 词数：90左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数;

3. 你从张曼玉的演艺生涯中学到了什么，请至少表达两点。

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you something about my favourite film star Zhang Manyu.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you something about my favourite film star Zhang Manyu. Zhang Manyu is a very famous actress who has achieved many rewards. Her first film was The Frog Prince. And she won the best actress in Tai Wan Golden Horse Film Festival. She is a pretty woman with clear eyes and of medium build. She is a very modest and talented actress. She has rich acting experience. She is good at acting smart police. She does well in Chinese, English and French. She was born in Hongkong on 20^th September in 1964 and moved to England when she was at the age of 8. She returned to Hongkong when she was 17 years old. She was a model before she became an actress. I think Zhang Manyu because she is very hardworking. She has made a lot of films and won a lot of rewards. I will work hard at my lessons just like her. And I also think I will study hard and make my dream come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文是写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己最喜爱的明星—张曼玉。在表格中给出了关于张曼玉的比较详细的资料，我们需要用正确的英语将其表达出来。除此之外，我们还需注意要表达一下你从张曼玉身上学到了什么，而且要说两点，这个是需要自己发挥的情况。所以文章的结构应主要分为两部分，一是介绍张曼玉的情况；而是从她身上所学到的东西。通过分析可知，这篇文章应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意不要错乱。另外还应注意文章表达的连贯、流畅。

【亮点说明】这篇短文比较全面的介绍了张曼玉的基本情况，要点全，表达准确。其中一些短语和连词的使用使得文章意思连贯，表达更流畅，如Zhang Manyu is a very famous actress who has achieved many rewards、She is a pretty woman with clear eyes and of medium build、I think Zhang Manyu because she is…等。稍微欠缺的地方就是自由发挥的地方，从张曼玉身上学到了什么，表达比较笼统。

考点：提纲作文。