题目内容
【题目】书面表达 (本大题共5分)
假设你是李华,在网上看到了Wildlife Protection Club (野生动物保护俱乐部) 招募志愿者的广告。请你用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席Mr. Brown,申请加入该俱乐部,并表示:如果能加入,将会很开心。请根据表格信息和提示完成申请信。
学校 | Sunshine Secondary School |
年级 | 八年级 |
品德 | 勤奋, 乐于助人 |
爱好 | 篮球和旅游,从小喜爱动物 |
申请理由 | …… |
联系方式 | 0510—87654321,lihua@sunshinetown.com |
注意:1.词数70左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.信须包括所有要点,申请理由用2-3句适当发挥;
3.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
I am a student in Grade 8 at Sunshine Secondary School. I am very hard-working and helpful. I love playing basketball and travelling. I loved animals when I was very young. I would like to learn more about animals. And I
hope to do something for animals.
I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club. Please call me on 0515-87654321 or e-mail me at lihua@sunshinetown.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如I’m also interested in learning about birds and animals.等,I hope等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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