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【题目】书面表达。

上个星期天,王老师(女)带着我们全班同学骑自行车去郊游。为了安全我们带上了头盔。我们进行了很多活动有划船,爬山,在山顶上野餐等。我们拍了很多照片。在回家的路上,李刚骑得很快。不小心撞到了树上。幸亏他伤得不重。王老师对他进行了急救。真是一次难忘的经历。

请根据上述内容写一篇80词左右的短文。

关键词: field trip郊游, on the top of在…顶上, hit撞击,give first aid急救

unforgettable难忘的

温馨提示:请不要逐句翻译。

【答案】

Last Sunday, it was a sunny day. Our teacher Miss Wang with the students in our class go for a field trip by bike. We wore a helmet for safety. We had a lot of activities such as boating, mountain climbing, picnic at the top of the hill. We took a lot of photos. How happy we felt! On the way home, Li Gang rode so fast that he accidentally hit a tree. Luckily, he didn’t hurt too badly. Miss Wang gave him first aid. It was really an unforgettable experience.

【解析】

试题解析:本文内容要求用第一人称和一般过去时态。灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点:本文叙事流畅,表达清晰。文中用了许多固定短语,如go for a...,such as,take photos等;副词luckily使用恰当;文章的句式也较丰富,简单句、so..that...引导结果状语从句等都有所使用。根据要求,做了恰到好处的发挥,效果不错。

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