Question

书面表达
请以“My Vacation”为题写一篇短文。假如你是 Mike，你印象最深的是去年暑假和家人一起去乡下（countryside）的爷爷家。乡下的空气很好，天气也不错；你和爷爷去爬山、钓鱼（go fishing），和堂弟去游泳；奶奶每天都给你做好吃的。你们过得很愉快。
要求50词左右，文章的开头已给出。
My Vacation
I remembered my last summer vacation.                                        
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

I remembered my last summer vacation. My family and I went to see my grandparents in the countryside. The air there is fresh, and the weather there was good, too.I went to the mountains and went fshing with my grandfather. And I went swimming with my cousin. My grandmother cooked delicious food for us every day. We had a great time.

试题分析：本书面表达是有关一次郊游的，书写时首先我们应该确定用第一人称；由于是上周，所以应该用过去时。写作时，注意句型和短语的应用，应该符合英语的表达习惯和语法结构。另外，还应该注意提示信息。
点评：书写本文时应该，注意交代清楚郊游的时间，地点，人物，以及感受。特别是写感受，应该深刻。