Question

【题目】请以 “ My friend ” 为题，用英语写一篇小短文，介绍你的一位好朋友。内容包括他（她）的姓名、年龄、生日、喜好等，50个词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

My friend

Hello, everyone! I want to introduce my best friend to you. My best friend is Lucy. She is from America. She is 13 years old. Her birthday is on June 6th. We are in the same class. At school she likes English best. She can speak it well. And she often helps me with it. Her favorite color is blue. Her pencil case and school bag are both blue. She also likes sports. She plays basketball after school with her classmates. She likes China.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以My friend 为题写一篇作文，介绍自己的一位好朋友，内容包括他的姓名、年龄、生日、喜好等，文章内容要丰富，衔接紧凑，要点齐全。关于介绍人物的文章，学生们在教材中和平时的练习中接触的都比较多，对这样的题材比较熟悉，对所使用的词汇和句型也较为熟悉，这是对学生们来说较为有利的因素。这篇作文的难点在于正确使用英语时态，尤其是动词的第三人称单数形式的变化。再就是英语表达和汉语不同的地方，不要写成汉语式的句子。另外，还要注意连词和较好词汇的使用，使整篇文章的内容连贯，表达流畅。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者给我们介绍了他的朋友Lucy，首先这篇作文内容完整，里面介绍了Lucy的国籍、年龄、生日、喜好等。其次短文的表达符合英语的规范，正确使用了时态和人称。这篇作文里主要使用了一般现在时态，第三人称she，谓语动词相应的都变成了第三人称单数形式，这是英语学习中的一个难点，作者在这方面表现得很不错。最后，作文里还使用了一些较好的句型，如She is from America.、At school she likes English best. She can speak it well、Her favorite color is blue、She also likes sports. She plays basketball after school with her classmates等。