Question

8．临近毕业之际，学校要举办一场毕业生告别晚会，假如你是九年级一班的l李明，将代表班级在会上发言．请结合内容提示，以"My speech at the school leavers'party"为题写一篇80-100词的发言稿．
内容提示：
1、How are you feeling while giving the speech？
2、Who do you want to stay thanks to？
3、Why do you want to thank them？
4、Your wishes for the future．
要求：
1、语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3、文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
My speech at the school leavers'party
Teachers and classmates，
I'm Li Ming from Class 1，Grade 9．I'm a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school leavers'party…
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇材料作文．通过审题了解写作的主要内容：假如你是九年级一班的李明，将代表班级在学校举办的毕业生告别晚会上发言，题目是"My speech at the school leavers'party"，发言稿中包括四个方面的内容，缺一不可．问题是一篇发言稿，所以要注意发言稿的格式；文章侧重于老师等人对于学生现在造成的影响，要感谢他们，所以主要的时态应该用现在完成时，可以夹杂少量的其他时态如一般现在时，对于未来的愿望可以用一般将来时等；人称为第一人称．注意文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称．

解答 One possible version：
My speech at the school leavers'party
Teachers and classmates，
I'm Li Ming from Class 1，Grade 9．I'm a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school leavers'party．
First，I'd like to thank all our teachers．We have learned a lot from you．You show us your kindness，your patience，and rich knowledge．You're developed our interests，skills and made us grow up happily．You'll always be our role models．
Next，I should thank my classmates．We have become good friends．We've studied together，helped each other and had a lot of fun．Soon we will go to new schools and we may not see each other so often in the future，But I believe our friendship will last forever．
Wish you all success and good luck in the future．
That's all．Thank you．

点评 此为材料作文．要仔细审题，抓住给出的4个要点把要表达的信息条理清楚的表达出来．要用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表达所提示的内容，例如文中使用的First，Next等词．要语言通顺，意思连贯，注意书写工整，尽量避免出现单词和语法错误．