Question

【题目】作文

你有几个好朋友？他们和你有什么共同点和不同点？假如今天外教课讨论的话题是好朋友，请你根据以下提示完成短文，在课堂上向大家介绍你的两个好朋友。

提示：1 The names of your friends 2 In which ways you are different or similar

3. Funny things when you get together .

要求：

语句通顺，逻辑连贯，可适当发挥。

2.不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I have two good friends .They are _____________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have two good friends.They are Wang Wei and Li Ming. In some ways we are the same. We all like sports， we often play basketball together after school. We also like reading and we usually go to the library on weekends. But in some ways we are different. Wang Wei is taller and more outgoing than me. He likes going to the movies， but I like playing computer games at home. Li Ming likes watching game shows because he thinks they are interesting. But I don’t like to watch them. I think they are meaningless.

【解析】

试题分析：这是个给材料作文。提示中已经给出了作文的写作要点。在写作时，注意将要点理清，不要遗漏。在整理文章的结构后，用正确的语言把意思表述清楚。文章可使用一般现在时，并且注意主谓一致。句子之间可适当的使用连词，使文章逻辑更紧密。

写作亮点：本文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语，如：in some ways 一些方面；both of us 两个都；on weekends 在周末；like watching TV喜欢看电视；等等。文中还用到了形容词的比较级和最高级，如best， taller， more outgoing等。此外，句子之间用了一些连词，使逻辑更紧密，如but，and， because等。