题目内容
【题目】作文
假如你叫张明,你在某报纸上看到澳大利亚学生James想在中国找一个笔友(pen pal)的消息,请根据以下内容写一封信,向James介绍你的个人情况。可以适当发挥。60词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Name: Zhangming Age(年龄): 12 School: No. 2 Middle School Favorite subjects: English and math Favorite food: hamburgers, ice-cream and eggs Favorite sports: tennis |
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear James,
I want to be your pen pal. Now let me introduce myself. My name is Zhangming. I am twelve years old.I come from Yue Yang No.2 Middle School.I'm glad to make friends with you. I like playing tennis. I am very interested in learning English and math. I have been learning English for more than six years since 2002. I want to be an English teacher in the future. My favorite food is ice-cream and eggs. I have a lot of good friends at school. I enjoy myself at school.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhangming
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,张明写信向James介绍他的个人情况。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I want to ...,My name is...,I am...,I have been ...,My favorite food is...,I have ...,I enjoy myself...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字,接下来介绍自己的年龄,喜好以及学校生活,最后希望James早日给他写信。此处come from,be glad to do sth,make friends with,like doing sth,be interested in,want to do sth,a lot of,enjoy oneself,write to sb等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。