Question

写作

假设你是李华，最近你校组织了一场讨论。讨论的主题是：本市要不要修地铁(subway)？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给某报社编辑写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况，并发表自己的看法。

要求：

1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2)必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3)词数：100词左右；开头已写好，不计入总词数。

4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。

Dear Editor,

　　The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．

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Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Editor,

　　The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．

　　Sixty percent of the students are for the idea of building a subway．Compared with other forms of transport, they think, the subway is more convenient, faster and safer．It can save energy and have less pollution．It can make the traffic on the ground less crowded and reduce traffic accidents．

　　However, forty percent of the students are against the idea．They think that building a subway will cost too much．It's a waste of money．We should build more highways and railways instead with the money．What's more, building a subway may destroy some cultural relics underground．

　　I think a subway is a sign of a modern city．By building a subway, we can travel around our city more easily．But we should spend as little money as possible building the subway．

　　评分标准：

　　一档文17－20分：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，基本无语法错误(1-2个错误)，或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。

　　二档文13－16分：基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误(3－4个错误)。

　　三档文9－12分：写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。

　　四档文5－8分：写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太通顺，语法结构单调、错误较多，只有少数句子可读，影响理解。

　　五档文0－4分：言不达意，不知所云；只有(1－2个)句子可读。