Question

为了交流经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英文报》正在举办以“How to be a good learner?”为题的征文比赛，请你踊跃投稿。内容提示如下：
 
注意：
1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should                                                
I hope all these will be helpful to you.

Answer 1

How to be a good learner
As a good learner,we should have good habits and ways in learner.we need ro get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class, after class,wemust revise and finish our homework on time. It’s good to  study in groups and heip each other. As a seudent,working hard is important,but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems,we’d better ask others for help, I hope all these wiil be helpful to you.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍如何做一个好的学习者。本题给出的材料是几个问题，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误.