Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分）

潍坊正在创建文明城市，假设你所在的学校要开展以“做文明市民，从不闯红灯做起”为主题的交通安全宣传月活动。请你写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈如何遵守交通法规。以下内容供参考：

walkers	cross, look, left and right, carefully
drivers/riders	drink, slow down, wear a seat belt(系安全带)，traffic lights, a helmet(头盔)
passengers	get on /off, push, wait in line

写作要求：1.条理清楚，行文连贯，逻辑性强，书写规范；

2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名；

3. 80词左右。

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe,

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Answer 1

【答案】

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe, everyone should follow traffic rules. When you walk, you should walk at the right side of the road. Always be careful and look left and right before you cross the road. If you like riding, don’t run through the red traffic lights. Don’t ride too fast. If you ride a motorbike, remember to wear your helmet. If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights. You must always wear a seat belt. You must never drink wine. When passengers are waiting for the bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t push others. Don’t get off the bus until it has stopped.

Remember: it is better to be on the safe side.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以写一篇作文谈谈关于如何遵守交通法规。根据表格提示可知我们这篇短文主要包括三部分的内容。一是行人在路上走应该注意的问题；二是司机开车的注意事项，比如不许酒驾，开车要慢，要注意及安全带。摩托车驾驶者要注意戴头盔等。三是坐公交车要注意排队，车停好再下车。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从三个方面讲述了我们应该如何遵守交通法规，层次非常的清晰。而且句子组织的也不错，并且用到了一些常见的复合句When you walk, you should walk at the right side of the road.和If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights.和这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如When passengers are waiting for the bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t get off the bus until it has stopped等。