Question

【题目】旅游不仅可以放松我们的心情，还可以开阔我们的视野，丰富我们的知识。去年暑假你和你的父母乘飞机去北京游玩了两天。请根据提示写一篇短文，要求要点齐全，可适当发挥，语句通顺，表达流畅，字数在80左右。

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1.第一天我们去爬长城，并且拍了许多照片，很累但是很快乐。

2.第二天我们参观了颐和园（The Summer Palace）人很多。 看到很多花，景色非常漂亮。我们了解到了很多关于我们国家的东西。

3.第三天，去购物，逛街，吃美味的食物。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last summer, we took a plane trip to Beijing. On the first day, we went to climb the Great Wall and took many photos. We were tired but very happy. On the second day, we visited the Summer Palace. There were too many people. We saw awww.dearedu.com lot of flowers and it had a very beautiful view. We learned a lot about our country there. On the third day, we went shopping in Wangfujin Street. We had delicious food there.We had a great time there.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文。要求考生按照题目的要求，写一篇连贯的文章。短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到语句通顺、意思连贯，主旨健康，中心突出但同时切记不能完全照抄原文的翻译。此外，考生在进行写作的时候，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，是文章的内容更生动。