Question

写一篇英语作文介绍一位好友。（建议：为避免透露姓名，女名用Lisa，男名用Mike。）
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version：
My Friend.
I have a good friend whose English name is Lisa. She is twelve years old and she is a very pretty girl. Everyone in our class including teachers likes her, but I am her best friend.We share everything we have and we nearly talk everything with each other.We both learn well, and we always learn together and help with each other.She was very out-going and cute.She likes telling jokes and funny things.She likes smiling, and you could always find smile blooming in her face.Well，this is my best friend.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我和我的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I have......；She is......；We share ......；She likes......；and you could always ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍我们一起做的事情，最后指出朋友的性格和喜好。此处用了 talk everything with , help with each other, telling jokes, likes smiling, 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。