Question

2．针对社会上人们对90后年轻人的某些评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展开了讨论．作为一名90后的中学生，请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言稿，展示真实的你．
要求：
（1）语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯，可适当发挥．
（2）文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息；
（3）词数：不少于80词．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：selfish（自私的）； Internet； believe in oneself； high ideals（崇高理想）； in style，creative
As we know，most of us are the only child in our families now．
We are growing up．We are sure to do better．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇话题类作文，且是写一篇英语发言稿，展示真实的你，所以要用第一人称来写，且要用一般现在时．需要写的内容没有给出，所以可以自由发挥的空间很大，写作时要注意把90后的特点写出来，最后提出我们会做得很好，We are sure to do better．同时还需要注意紧扣文章主题，和开头与结尾有一个很好的衔接．

解答 As we know，most of us are the only child in our families now．Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us，which make us become selfish．Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others．There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well．
  We teenagers have high ideals．We always believe in ourselves and never say"die"．Meanwhile we are in style．New ideas can be easily accepted by us．You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life．We also know how to respect your parents and teachers．We are growing up．We are sure to do better．

点评 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求写一篇发言稿，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题，更不能出现观点性错误．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．