Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，是我校一位高二学生。最近你收到来自友好学校朋友Tom的邀请，请你下个周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并介绍中国的传统绘画。但是你和其他高二学生一样在忙于准备期末考试，不得不谢绝他的邀请。请根据下面的要点给Tom用英语写一封回信。

要点： 1. 谢绝Tom的邀请；

2. 说明你的理由；

3. 推荐你的同学Mary参加，并说明原因。

注意： 1．词数为100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头已为你写好(不计入你所写词数)。

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation. ________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.

I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I, together with my classmates, am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.

I bly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting, which, combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.

Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是考生非常熟悉的书信，首先要审好题，本文属于半开放性的作文，要点给的很模糊，要求考生有较多的个人发挥。在写作时要注意使用高级的词汇如recommend，inconvenience等。同时也要注意使用合适的连接词，和高级句式如定语从句，状语从句，强调句等等，让文章更有层次。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。例如：I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩。