Question

你觉得你的校园生活安全吗？请你写一篇题为“How to Keep Safe in School”的短文，谈谈你的看法。卷面要求：书写工整，不得出现真实真实人名与校名，字数要求60-80词

内容包括：

1.描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件(经过与结果)。

2.提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议(至少两条)。

3.呼吁每个学生要注意校园安全。

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。写作中注意应时态语，时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：Two students ran after each other两个学生互相追赶；Teachers had better keep an eye on the students老师最好时刻关心学生等。学习中应注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。