题目内容

书面表达

刘伟,无臂钢琴演奏者。他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂,但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦想。经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴,他最终在“中国达人秀”(China’s Got Talent)的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。

要求:

1.简要描述刘伟的经历;

2.谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示;

3.词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience._______

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答案:
解析:

  答案:

  Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience.He lost his arms in an accident when he was 10, but he didn’t give up his dream of being a pianist.He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet.Finally he realized his dream in "China’s Got Talent".

  As a student, I’ve learnt a lot from his story.We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard.No matter how hard life is, we won’t fail unless we give up our hope.

  评分标准:

  考生应根据题目要求,采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语,

  完整、准确地表达所要求的内容。分四档评分:

  第一档:符合题目要求,内容完整,层次结构清晰,表达清楚,语言无误。13-15分。

  第二档:基本符合题目要求,内容较完整,层次结构较清晰,表达较清楚,语言有少量错误。9-12分。

  第二档:部分内容符合题目要求,内容不够完整,层次结构不够清晰,表达不够清楚,语言有较多错误。4-8分。

  第四档:不符合题目要求,整篇表达不清楚,或照抄、拼凑几个词语。0-3分。


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