题目内容
9.在每个人的心中,总会渴望拥有某样东西,你想拥有什么?请以"I want to have "为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受.要求:
1.请补全标题,如 a football,a mountain bike 或 a magic paintbrush 等;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80词左右.
I want to havea magic paintbrush
I want to have a paintbrush with magic power.It can make whatever I draw become a reality.
With the paintbrush,I can draw a new earth.There will be so pollution on it.The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue.With the paintbrush,I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family.
I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world..
分析 本题是要以"I want to have "为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受.从要求可以得知,写这篇文章时态要用一般将来时或I want/hope/wish等句型,在这里写作要点包括:1.你想拥有什么.2.为什么.3.怎么用或者是你的想法或感受.
解答 I want to have a magic paintbrush
I want to have a paintbrush with magic power.It can make whatever I draw become a reality.
With the paintbrush,I can draw a new earth.There will be no pollution on it.The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue.With the paintbrush,I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family.
I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world.
点评 以提纲提供情景的作文.要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题,但要注意,文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点.行文间要注意简化描述,用简短的语句代替冗长的语句.在作文完成的时候,应该检查、修改,以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节.写作时,要注意谓语动词形式的变化.另外,还需要使用一些句型和短语,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅.
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