题目内容
书面表达
假如你是《达州晚报》的小记者，星期六和同学去参加了“文明小市民”的活动。请根据下面提供的信息，把当天的活动写成日记发表在晚报上，倡导更多的同学和市民来关心环境综合治理。
要求：1．日记内容应包括以上提示的所有内容，可适当发挥。
2．书写工整，句式规范，条理清楚。
3．不得出现真实的姓名和地名。
4．日记的格式和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。词数：80词左右。
提示词语：at the school gate(在校门口)
Saturday，March 14th
I took part in the“Civilized Citizen”activity with my classmates today．
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解析：
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One possible version： Saturday, March14th I took part in the“Civilized Citizen”activity with my classmates today．We got together at the school gate at 8∶30a.m．and left for the People’s Park．On the way to the park, we found some people break the traffic rules．For example, two men went across the street when the traffic lights were red．In the park, people were having fun．But a few children were climbing the trees or drawing pictures on the walls．Many people were talking loudly in public．And on the ground, too much litter had been thrown here and there． To change this situation, we began to pick up the litter and throw it into the dustbin, clean the walls, and plant trees．And then we told the children that climbing trees is dangerous and bad for the trees．Also, we said politely to some people,“Would you mind keeping your voice down and enjoy the quiet of the park?”After hearing our words, those people all realized their mistakes and corrected them immediately．At that moment, we felt excited and proud． Environment is rather important to all of us．Though our today’s activity can’t totally solve the problem of the environment, I believe we can make people understand that even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．Let’s work together to make the world a better place to live in! 一、评分原则 1．本题总分为10分，按四个档次给分，至少包含以下要点：集合的时间和地点、活动地点、发现的不良现象、采取的措施、活动的意义和感受。评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 2．文中若出现真实的人名、地名，酌情扣分。 二、评分标准
三、说明 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。相同的错误不重复计算。 |
书面表达
假如你是班长，学期结束时你要给同学作简短的评价。你班的李华这个学期变化很大，请你根据提示写一篇简评。
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过去 |
功课不好，常与同学争吵，垃圾被他撒的满地都是，课桌总是一团糟。 |
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现在 |
自从老师和他沟通后，有了很大变化。（学习、与同学相处、生活……） |
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结果 |
父母、老师对他很满意。 |
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希望 |
在即将到来的考试中取得好成绩。 |
注意：
短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
括号部分须用3、4句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。