Question

暑假就要到了，某社团将组织部分青年参加一些志愿活动。请你根据面前的海报和你个人特长，选择参加其中两项活动，谈谈你选择它们的原因以及你准备具体做些什么？（词数80左右）


☆★☆  Visit Old People’s Home
☆★☆  Teach in the Village School
☆★☆  Help Clean Up the City Parks
☆★☆  Help Sick Children in the Hospital
Come and join us!

Answer 1

Dear Sir，
I am a middle student. I want to be a volunteer to help people. I think I’m the person who can get on well with the old. Although I’m busy, I still want to visit Old People’s Home as a volunteer. More than doing some cleaning for the old, performing a play with my friends is another thing I can do.
If I had another chance, I would help sick children in the hospital. I love children and I plan to put this love to good use by working in the hospital with sick children.
In a word. I would like to help people who need help. Please call me up—62878888.
Warm-hearted

解析试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，注意从四项活动中选取两项进行描写。然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。
考点：命题作文的写作
点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。