Question

如今，旅游已经成为人们喜爱的一项活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下你所熟悉的一名旅游爱好者的基本情况以及他(她)的一次旅行经历。
提示：
1. What’s his/her name?   2. What’s he/she like?  3. How often does he/she travel?
4. Where did he/she travel to?  5. What did he/she do?
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：80左右。

Answer 1

                                    
Travelling
My friend Lily is a travelling lover. She is tall and always has a sweet smile on her face. She travels to foreign countries with her parents once a year .
This summer vacation,she went to Korea with her parents and sister.They went there by Korean Air and really enjoyed themselves on the plane.It took them 3 hours to get there.Things were fine in Korea.They stayed in Korea for 5 days.They visited many places of interest.Besides,they bought many special products,such as pickles，seaweeds and so on.In short,this is an unforgettable trip.     

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者以熟悉的一名旅游爱好者的基本情况以及他(她)的一次旅行经历,介绍情况用一般现在时，讲述旅行经历用一般过去时。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如has a sweet smile on her face,enjoyed themselves, places of interest.,such as,and so on,in short, by air等短语; 固定句型It took them 3 hours to get there; 文章层次清晰，表达流畅。