题目内容
15.某校开展"我是课堂小主人"建议征集活动,各班就此展开讨论,同学们纷纷发言:"我希望能有足够的自主学习时间…""我喜欢的课堂是每人都有一台笔记本电脑,方便上网查询…""课上我们能自由地讨论,充分展示我们的学习成果…"等等.请你结合同学们讨论的结果,给校长以电子邮件的形式写一封信,建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱,也更有利于同学们未来的发展.内容须包含以下要点:●What js your favorite class like?
●Please tell us an unforgettable experience you've had in your class.
●Please give at least two suggestions.
要求:1.词数80词左右,提示词仅供参考;
2.邮件的格式已给出,开头、结尾不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
4.请将答案写在答题卡相应的位置上.
分析 这是一篇应用文--电子邮件,邮件的内容是向校长叙述开展"我是课堂小主人"的建议征集.首先根据内容要点提示写出"自己最喜欢的课堂是什么样的?"用一般现在时态.接下来讲述自己课堂上难忘的一次经历,要用一般过去时态.然后根据学生们讨论的结果"我希望能有足够的自主学习时间…""我喜欢的课堂是每人都有一台笔记本电脑,方便上网查询…""课上我们能自由地讨论,充分展示我们的学习成果…",提出自己的建议,至少两条.为了使建议更加条理性,可加一些顺序副词,如:firstly;secondly;at last等
解答 A possible version:
Dear Mr.Li,
My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups,which is good for my development,I think.
I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class.Several days ago I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but they were too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmates for help. After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group.How excited I was!
Having such a great experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don't teach us too much in class.We need about 30minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class.Secondly,please provide us with some laptops if possible,so we can surf the Internet easily.No doubt,we need an open and free class,you see.
That's all.Thank you.
Best wishes,
Zhang Hua.
点评 一篇好的书面表达要有合理的段落层次,让人感觉条理清新.为了使文章结构紧凑,自然流畅,段落之间要使用适当的过度语;句子之间要使用合理的逻辑衔接词.
煮面条的过程 | 水,面条,鸡蛋,佐料…(3-4个步骤) |
爸爸吃面条后的感受 | 美味,高兴,夸奖… |
你的想法和打算 | 自豪,感恩,祝福,多帮助父母分担家务… |
1.请使用恰当的关联词叙述做面条的过程.
2.可以适当增加内容,但是文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称.
3.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范.
4.词数80左右.日记开头已给出,不计入总词数.
Sunday,June 21 Sunny
Today is Father's Day.I got up early and.
My English Teacher
Name | Ms.Li |
Age | 35 |
Looks | tall,beautiful,long curly hair |
Hobbies | reading,singing,dancing,playing sports |
Character(性格) | patient,friendly,warm-hearted |
My comment(评价) | a good teacher,a friend,a mother |
(2)语言要通顺,表达要正确.
(3)文章要求包含表格中的所有提示.
(4)词数不少于60个英语单词.
(5)文章开头已给出,不计入词数.
I have met many excellent teachers in junior school.One of them is my English teacher.Her name is Ms.Li.She is about thirty-five years old.She is not only tall but also beautiful.She has long curly hair Ms.Li also has a lot of hobbies,such as reading,singing,dancing,playing sports.She is very patient with us.We all think she is a friendly and warm-hearted teacher.Ms.Li is a good teacher.She is like a friend of ours.And sometime she is also like our mother.We all love her..
A. | yes | B. | send | C. | me |