Question

6．目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日"全国学生营养日"开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧．请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐．

学生比例	早餐情况	健康状况
55%	有规律地吃早餐	身体健康，精力充沛
25%	吃垃圾食品	营养不均衡
20%	没有吃早餐	感到饥饿，上课无法认真听讲，容易生病

提示词：regularly，active，junk food（垃圾食品），a balanced diet，as a result
要求：
（1）所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法．
（2）所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥．
（3）字数80词左右．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55percent of the studentshave breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．（It is bad for their health．） 20 percent （of the students） go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇图表作文，要求是根据你所在学校的学生会在5月20日"全国学生营养日"开展的问卷调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐．写作内容要根据吃早餐的情况，分析到具体比例和形成的原因．人称要以第三人称they来写，也可用到 数+percent of the students等做主语，由于是介绍调查结果，也就是平时的情况，应该用一般现在时．

解答 Breakfast Is Important
    Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55
percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．（It is bad for their health．） 20 percent （of the students） go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
    It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．

可以借鉴的短语
as a result  作为结果
What's worse  更糟糕的是
keep healthy   保持健康

可以借鉴的句型：
Breakfast is important，About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．
What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast．